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I only notice the heart afterwards and thought of doing this. Please tell me how may I improve?

Model: Janice

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possiblt finding some way of removing the flip flops in the back ground.. they add movement which kind of takes away from the heart and the girl. other wise its a wonderfully framed piece. nice job:clap:

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Is the flip-flop getting too much attention, I haven't thought of that? How do you (or what do you mean by) add movement?

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I am special cause that is what my mummy told me.
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:iconprism620:
becasue the flip flops add a line that points away from the girl.. that creates the movement. finding some way of taking that out would frame the girl and the heart better. just an idea:)

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"the soul has greater need of the ideal than of the real"

come to my gallery! :gallery: [link]

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September 17, 2005
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Canon
Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
1/500 second
F/3.5
22 mm
100
Sep 16, 2005, 4:58:02 PM

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