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two little rhymes.

Sun Jan 9, 2005, 12:26 PM
short rhymes aways pops in my head. Want to share two recent ones. These are mainly driven by a new nick-name for msn.

User-name after New Year 2005:

Isn't it STRANGE. a year used to be VAST.
As we AGE, years PASS.
My last year went FAST,
not even a blink it LASTED.


User-name for now as I am about to return to UK for school:

Sitting in my room,
humming a tune.
dreaming of lagoons.

Sitting like a baboon,
no more merry tunes.
holidays pass too soon.


Version 2:

Living in Lagoons,
singing merry Tunes,
christmas passing Soon.

Sitting in my Room,
Just like a Baboon,
(book in hand)
Chewing at a Spoon.

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rap? rhyme? its dope :)

haf fun in England :)

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Thanks, england is pretty boring really. Not much to do.

Is the first version or the second version better though?

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